Rozaneh
There are quite a few weekly and monthly Persian magazines published here in Toronto. Rozaneh is probably the youngest , but definitely the most elegant. The young people who have started this magazine are right on track. High quality pictures, ads and a wave of style and fashion makes it different. However, there are a few things that would help to improve:
1- It's necessary that an editor reviews the context before print. In some places, two sentences are mixed without proper junction or a verb is missed.
2- The magazine is full of pictures. Some are self-explanatory but some, like the article about Spain, need introduction. The pictures are nice, but without a label, they don't tell much.
3- It would be better if more information was provided on some pages as there are parts of the page that are left empty. For example, in National Geographic magazine, they have one page articles usually about a picture, an event or a flashback. They provide enough information about the subject on that page by itself.

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